📘 Lesson Intro: Suggest Appropriate Revisions (Using the “Easy Circuit” as the Text)
Today, you’ll practice a real-life writing skill: suggesting appropriate revisions. That means you will read a short set of directions and improve them so they are clearer, safer, and easier to follow—without changing the main idea.
We’ll use a fitness routine called the “Easy Circuit.” Your job is to act like an editor and ask:
Is anything confusing?
Are the steps in a good order?
Are the instructions specific (time, rest, repeats)?
Is it safe and age-appropriate?
Are the words simple and helpful?
By the end, you’ll be able to suggest revisions like:
adding missing details (example: “Repeat 2–3 rounds” → when to do 2 vs 3)
replacing unclear words with clearer ones
making directions more organized and easy to follow
Quick Warm-Up Question:
If someone did this workout for the first time, what part might confuse them or make them do it wrong?
📘 IXL Activity Instructions
Click the IXL link below.
Answer questions 1–30 only.
Read each question carefully.
Choose the best answer.
Work independently and make sure your progress is saved.